ten crazy notes while my inner editor was sleeping, spring cleaning, and recycling old critiques

March 6th, 2012

The last few years, I’ve developed the bad habit of putting things in piles instead of filing them or throwing them away (even though I’m usually an organized person). There’s even what I call, “the big box of evil,” which is a whole box full of this stuff. Today I started my attempt at spring cleaning and filing with this stack:

I have found so many things already! Things I’ve been looking for, things I don’t remember, and things that don’t make sense. I thought I’d share ten of of the funny and/or nonsensical ones (a.k.a. the things we write when our inner editor is sleeping).

1. “Her car was trampled, and maybe her parents (they are missing). Explanation of cow behavior??” (I like that I thought it was ok to have the parents get trampled, as if it’s their punishment for going missing. Also, the cows obviously did it.)

2. “468,000 cows in MN.” (Post-it note from my mom. No other explanation. Can’t remember why I asked for this info, but I do like cows. Don’t think this has anything to do with the cows in the first note, though.)

3. “Sheila’s voice is that of a self-absorbed stand up comic … if the comic was a teenage zombie girl, obsessed with boys, cheerleading, and chickens.” (I used to do stand up and met a few comics that would fit this description, other than the zombie part. And it totally fits my character.)

4. “seasonal babies?” (Not sure, but I think this was a PB idea. I’m sure I meant seasonal in a good way, not the way it sounds, as though you can rent babies for a season, which is just wrong.)

5. “They are jealous of my fang-tastic-ness.” (Vampire character’s thoughts. Clearly a line that was cut in revision!)

6. “The Four Seasons: Bunny, Goose, Bear, and Moose.” (This was for a series of illustrations featuring different animals with different seasons.)

7. “Chickens are to cows, like chocolate is to ice cream … not essential, but much more fun.” (Everyone thinks this, right?)

8. “Stress makes my mind sweaty.” (One of my characters said this in notes. Got cut before the first draft.)

9. “composition/layout: simple, yet not” (It’s nice when notes are so specific and have no context. Ha.)

10. Land of the Lost diagram:

(If you read my first drafts, you’d know that I learned all my plotting skills from the old TV show, Land of the Lost. Good thing plot nonsense can be cleared up in revisions! I still think about the show once in a while, especially the sleestaks. This is a diagram I doodled in my writing notebook. Apparently in the real world, the Zarn translates as disco, and lizards can’t talk.)

I also found a whole bunch of old novel critiques that I ended up throwing away. I used to save them fore ver, but I don’t have room anymore! Plus, my novel has moved on from where I was back then (thanks to the critiques).

What do you do with your old critiques? Keep? Throw? Use the back as scrap paper?

Do you put off filing? If so, what kinds of things do you unearth when you get around to filing?

This is only the beginning of spring cleaning … who knows what I’ll find next!

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Notes from the SCBWI NY conference

February 5th, 2012

Friday: Illustrators Marketing Intensive

There was lots of great advice about marketing your work and the workshop was geared towards people that had books out or would have them out soon. I think there was a lot of info that’s useful to pre-published illustrators as well. Here’s a smattering of my notes and the points I thought were particularly useful. Some people talked faster than I could write, so the quotes are paraphrased.

John Rocco:

*Put your website URL in your trailer so people can find you after watching it.

*Expect nothing from your publisher (for promotion) and think of things that you can do to help the book (trailer, bookmarks, coloring pages, local contacts, etc.).

*Book trailers don’t have to be snazzy. You’re an illustrator; tell the story.

*Be kind. Be generous with your time and work, with bookstores and at signings. Be sincere.

Dan Santat:

*Build a network of peers: sincere relationships are very important.

*Blog consistently, at least once a week, so people will keep coming back. Talk about your work, but talk about other stuff too.

*Uses or has used different sites to promote his work (Flickr, Tumblr, Blog, Facebook, Illustration Friday), but says: You can do as much social networking as you want, but your work is what’s going to get you jobs.

*Handmade feel makes trailers more appealing.

Sophie Blackall:

*If you like doing something, find a way to call it work (like her blog to book: Missed Connections).

*If your stuff isn’t out there, it won’t be seen.

Dan Yaccarino (on giving presentations):

*Know your topic (research even if you think you know it).

*Know your audience (kids, adults, kidlit people) and tailor the presentation accordingly. Sometimes the ideas/content for audiences overlaps.

*Don’t sign a cast or anything else or you will have to do it for everyone. Kids have a keen sense of fairness.

*Don’t shake hands with the kids. Fist bump and then Purell so you don’t get the flu.

*Be flexible (what if your computer goes out?).

*Drawing during a school visit is like a magic trick to a kid. If you can do it, do it.

Michelle Fadlalla:

*Make the package you send stand out so that people will be interested and will review it. It’s also good to know who the right person is to send it to, instead of blanketing everyone in the industry.

*Anything that the publisher offers, take advantage of it.

Deb Shapiro:

*Have patience. It takes a long time to build and develop your presence. It’s about the long run, not the sprint. Patience and hard work will get you there eventually.

Jed Bennett:

*Let your publisher know what you can do for them. You have to be the biggest champion for your book.

Saturday and Sunday: General Conference Notes

Jean Feiwel:

*This is a bestseller business. You have to make money for the company (most of the time). Your work needs to have a commercial appeal.

Barbara Marcus:

*There is some balance. If you’re going to publish Jaws/Twilight/Harry Potter, you’ll have room for a quiet book or a first novel, but there’s only so much room for those.

Rubin Pfeffer:

*Your content should touch the heart and soul and/or the funny bone, no matter how you write it.

Cathy Goldsmith:

*The best books happen when there’s dialog and the author, illustrator, art director, and editor all give and take a little.

*Don’t waste the publisher’s time by doing art in a different style than what is in your portfolio (unless you talk with them first and they okay it).

*Do character studies and development before sketching scenes/spreads from the book.

*Pacing is always important in a PB. (My Note: Pacing is important in MG & YA too.)

*You need to think about continuity (how details are presented throughout the book) so the publisher doesn’t catch it later and you have to change it, or they catch it too late.

Cassandra Clare:

*Forbidden love is usually forbidden by family, society, or because it’s dangerous.

*The almost, but not quite, forbidden love isn’t that interesting.

*Your audience will like it, the more tension there is, and the more forbidden it is.

*The Buffy Problem = teen in love with a supernatural being hundreds of years older.

*Solution = put teen in a position of power to balance age/power issue.

*Note: characters many years older (hundreds) better than say a 55 yr. old and a teenager because 55 yr. olds are adults. Nobody knows a 700 yr. old, which makes them timeless.

*Love triangle: what you want is an actual love triangle, where the two love interests have a relationship with each other as well (friends, brothers, etc.). It makes it more complicated and interesting.

*Make sure each arm of the triangle has equal weight and is just as interesting as the other.

*People want tension and high stakes, and to not know what’s going to happen.

*The kind of love story that’s fun to live is not fun to read about.

Lin Oliver:

*If writing for a younger audience (PB, CB, MG), take the word, “love,” out of it and replace it with, “friendship,” to create tension.

Martha Rago:

*Strong characters that feel real and will be likeable in a universal way and relatable way will endear them to the reader. Readers respond to a well defined character whether it’s in a series or a one-off.

Samantha McFerrin:

*Start the story right away. No need to set the scene.

Peter Brown:

*If you’re going to make it in this business, you have to be an idea factory.

Brett Helquist:

*There’s a danger of becoming cliché and doing the same thing if you always draw from your head (talking about how he does lots of photo research for sketches, to grow, learn, and to get different features and faces so his art keeps growing).

Dan Yaccarino:

*The story of the book is a character’s needs. How can they get what they need bu the end of the book?

David Gordon:

*Your success is directly proportionate to your ability to take rejection.

Note: Cross-posted to my other blog.

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Agent news!

January 31st, 2012

My blog has been a bit quiet lately because at the beginning of November, everything started to get crazy for me. I can finally announce why. I have an agent! I accepted an offer from the wonderful Barry Goldblatt of bgliterary in December (but just signed the contract this week).

More details and my new postcard are posted here.

Crossing my fingers that 2012 is full of awesomeness, like a giant gumball machine suddenly appearing in your house when you have a shiny new quarter to spend. (Or maybe I just wanted to post this photo of a giant gumball machine – this thing is so cool!)

BTW, it’s not at my house, but it’s not too far away if I want to get a gumball now and then.

Here’s to a 2012 filled with giant gumball machines (or whatever amazing thing you can imagine happening)!

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NaNoWriMo Day 27: Oh the pasta-bilities, oops, I mean possibilities

November 27th, 2011

Every day is full of possibilities (or pasta-bilities as I sometimes call them, usually when I’m hungry). This is what I imagine in my head when I think of the phrase:

It’s silly, but when you’re in a writing rut or feeling down, silly can lift you back up again. Speaking of silly, what do you think is the possibility of seeing Spider Man with bunny ears? Pretty slim, right? Wrong! Here you go:

If Spider Man can go around sporting bunny ears, then you can keep writing until the end of NaNoWriMo, you can achieve your personal writing goal (whatever it is, and whether it’s NaNo related or not), and you can finish your novel (whether it’s over/under 50k words, or is finished in November, December, or even later)!

Sometimes a possibility presents itself and you have to stop or slow down your NaNo novel to achieve a different goal. That’s okay too. As long as you are working towards a goal and can come back to your novel again later. That’s what I’m doing. My novel writing has slowed down (but I’m still writing!) due to a non-writing project and a bout with the plague (actually a horrible cold, but it feels like the plague, or what I’d imagine the plague feels like, since I’ve never had it).

So write on, and imagine the pasta-bilities in store for your characters and for you too!

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NaNoWriMo Day 16: first aid for your novel

November 16th, 2011

Do you ever wish that there was an ER you could take your NaNoWriMo novel to? Or maybe all you need is a good first aid kit and some bandages. Or duct tape, because you can hold anything together with that, right? Just like any injury, you will first need to assess what’s wrong. Obviously this will be different for every novel, but here’s a common problem:

Let’s pretend that the injury isn’t too serious – you sprained your ankle (in other words, your novel is in pain, but it’s nothing that can’t be fixed). For this, the doctor’s advice might be to RICE (Rest, Ice, Compression, Elevate). For your novel, you could follow similar advice:

R = Rest: Stepping away from your novel* for a short time could give you energy to jump back in, or allow your subconscious to work on a solution to your problem.

I = Ice: When you ice your sprained ankle, it helps keep swelling down. To keep your novel from swelling with unnecessary words (hard to do during NaNo), while increasing your creativity, try writing a chapter in all dialog, or write it in verse. When you’re done, go back and write your chapter again, only this time write the way you normally would. Did you use fewer words or make the voice more distinctive? If not, try again, writing a different way. Another suggestion: write a chapter using only made up Newspaper Headlines for dialog, description, action, etc.

C = Compression: If you’re suffering from Shiny New Idea Syndrome (great book ideas that threaten to pull you away from the book you’re currently writing), compress the new ideas down into a few lines and write them down for later. Put them in your idea file. If you don’t have an idea file, start one. Do not keep thinking about the new idea, for that way lies madness.

E = Elevate: If you have writer’s block, try promoting your main character to a new job, give her a more lofty goal, or introduce a new nemesis that will raise the stakes and get you excited about something new to write (without jumping to a shiny new book idea).

If all this fails, it may be time to go back to the plot doctor to get new medicine (or a new plot).

Good luck!

Keep writing!

* I had to take a break from my novel for a week, which usually happens for one reason or another. This year I was sick for a couple of days and then had to work on a different project for the rest of the week. I’m not too worried though. Word count isn’t my ultimate goal, and even if it were, I completed NaNo in two weeks one year (it was painful, but I did it).

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NaNoWriMo Day 14: you never know what’s going to happen

November 14th, 2011

You never know what’s going to happen. Life and fiction are full of surprises. A new character could pop up in your novel today, you could win the lottery, or you could write 5000 words in one session (it could happen). In this stage of NaNoWriMo, it might seem like you’re not going to make it to the finish line, but you’ve still got two weeks left. And you never know what’s going to happen until it does.

For instance, people might tell you that Holsteins don’t have horns,* and even though you know they are wrong, you don’t have proof. Then one day, you happen to be in another state, in a place you don’t know and have never been to, and suddenly, you see this:

They do exist! And now you have proof!**

Here’s to hoping that you have wonderful surprises ahead of you this week! I’m hoping to have a couple of those 5000 word days. I need to catch up.

* Holstein cows and bulls have horns, but they are usually removed when the animals are young (so that they don’t hurt themselves or other livestock). Even though you rarely see them with horns, it’s how I always picture them.

** This photo was taken a couple of weeks ago. It really was an unexpected sighting in an area I’d never been to before. Oh, and they didn’t only have one moo with horns, they had two! Both were bulls, and very peaceful, which I’ve been told is also unusual. BTW, the bulls had rings through their noses, which you can barely see in the picture. The farm also had an adorable donkey who will most likely make a future blog appearance.

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NaNoWriMo Day 11: ten tips for writers from the cat

November 11th, 2011

Remus the cat has ten tips for writers to help them get their work done.*

1. The kitty is watching, so you’d better be writing!

2. Write down your ideas before they get blurry.

3. Remember to take breaks to play with the cat.

4. Stop watching the weather channel. Hey! I didn’t say to switch channels. Ooh, I love Criminal Minds; don’t turn it off! If you eat lunch while this show is on, we can watch TV.

5. Stop checking your email every five seconds!

6. Where are you going? You’d better be thinking about your novel while you’re gone! Don’t forget to bring a notebook with you, and a pen.

7. This is my NaNoWriMo buddy, but you can brainstorm plot ideas with us if you want.

8. I see you playing on the internet. Stop tweeting and get back to work!

9. You have to dig deep to write the important scenes.

10. I’m sleeping now. You’re on the honor system, but you’d better be writing when I wake up!

* He looks cute, but he’s a bit of a task master!

I haven’t made much progress the last couple of days because I’ve been under the weather. However, today is a new day, and I have the cat to help keep me on course.

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NaNoWriMo Day 8: twelve questions to help you focus on story and characters, not word count

November 8th, 2011

During NaNoWriMo, it seems like all you hear about is word count, not good storytelling. A lot of people are focusing only on word count, but you don’t have to. You can focus your writing on the characters and the story they need to tell. That doesn’t mean you can’t write a quick and crappy first draft that you’ll fix later. It just means that you shouldn’t forget about telling a good story while you’re trying to write fast.

I like to think that Cookie Monster is listening to a good story in this picture (probably one about cookies). Look at that expression! Even though it’s just a hat with earphones, it really captures Cookie Monster’s character, doesn’t it? Obviously CM likes the audio book he’s listening to. How can you write a great story that people will like reading or listening to?

Here are twelve questions to help you focus on your story and characters, not just word count:

1. Does this scene move the story forward?

2. How does this scene help my character achieve her goals?

3. How does this scene thwart my character’s plans?

4. Where does the subplot fit in this scene?

5. Are the threads of my story working together or do they seem like they could be in different books?

6. Does the romance seem believable?

7. How can I make the romance more believable?

8. Do I need to add a note about foreshadowing this event earlier in the novel?

9. Are there different choices that my characters could make that would result in the same ending?

10. If so, would the other choices make for a better story?

11. Do my character’s actions ring true given what she’s done/said so far in the book?

12. How can I make the minor characters just as real as the main character?

Note: This is not a complete list. It’s just a few questions I like to ask myself when I’m writing and revising.

What questions do you ask when you’re writing?

p.s. If you focus on word count at the expense of your story, Cookie Monster will eat your extra words. It’s true; he did it to me.

How I did on Day 8: Still writing! Will update before I go to sleep (I don’t count words until the end of a writing session).

FYI: My next post won’t be until Friday. After that, I will post Monday, Wednesday & Friday until the end of the month. My blogging time is cutting into my writing time!

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NaNoWriMo Day 7: dreams and sacrifice

November 7th, 2011

For most people, it takes sacrifice to achieve a dream.* Whether your dream is to write a novel, become a master chef, or train animals for the circus, you will probably have to sacrifice something to reach your goal (time, money, family, etc.). What kind of sacrifice you make depends on what your dream is and what your situation in life is.

The nice thing about creative people is that they are encouraging (especially in the children’s book community). When we get rejections or are having doubts, other writers/illustrators cheer us on. People always say that you can do anything you set your mind to,** but what if continuing to try isn’t good for you?

What if, by continuing down a path of misery, you miss the path that you’re really meant to take? If you’re not enjoying the ride, maybe it’s time to get off and think about what you really want to do. If you want to write, than figure out a way to do it that will bring you joy, or at least not misery. If you don’t want to write, what do you want to do? What would make you happy? Go do that instead.

You might have to sacrifice one dream to reach a dream you are more passionate about (or have a better chance at success with). Giving up a dream is never easy, so how do you choose which dream to sacrifice?*** Ask yourself: Which one is more important to you right now? Another thing to try is a pro and con list for each dream. Finally, be realistic about which one would make you happier or give you more chance for success.

I love this sign! It inspires me to do what I’m passionate about.

Focus on one thing or risk never achieving anything. Some people are super human and don’t require sleep, so they can do everything. If you are one of those people, good for you! For the rest of us, we have to be realistic about what we can do.**** Sometimes that means sacrificing one thing for another. Other times it means that if we stop watching TV or playing on the internet, we might have time to do more.

How are you doing with your NaNoWriMo novel? I hope you’re going strong without too much sacrifice!

How I did on Day 7: So far I have about 300 words, but I’ll come back and update later (with hopefully a lot more words). Update: 1326 words today.

* I wasn’t planning to write this post today, but it’s been on my mind as I’ve been trying to write. Not only that, but it’s a good counter post to the one from the weekend about taking a break.

** I believe that you can achieve anything you set your mind to, and that sometimes being told you can’t do something is the push you need to make it happen. But there are times when you can (and probably should) accept that a dream is not going to happen, at least not in the way you hoped it would. If you don’t let it crush your spirit, you might find a new dream that fits you even better.

*** Choosing one dream over the other doesn’t mean you can never go back or that you can’t focus on one and make the other a hobby (for now).

**** If you want to achieve multiple dreams, try sitting down to make a plan for how you are going to pursue both. Will it be at the same time? On alternating days or months? Or do you need to try one first and then go for the other one later? Be as realistic as possible. Talk it out with a friend or family member if you think that will help.

 

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NaNoWriMo Days 5 and 6: time is on your side

November 6th, 2011

It’s still early in the month (so you have a chance to catch up on your NaNoWriMo word count if you’re behind). Not only that, but we got an extra hour today because the clocks were turned back. WooHoo! What did you do with your extra hour? Did you write? Spend more time with your family? Sleep? Or a bit of each? I spent time with my husband and our kitty and got in a bit more of this:

Isn’t he so cute?

Sometimes you need a break to think about what’s working, what’s not, and what needs to happen next. A break is just what I needed to plan where my novel is going and figure out why the first chapter wasn’t working as well as I wanted it to. On Saturday, I came up with the ending (I can’t wait to write it). I also came up with a new title (that I actually like). I’m still calling it Kayla on my blog for now (titles change). On Sunday (today!), I realized that my opening chapter needs a new sequence of events leading up to the major event (to make it more plausible). To keep things moving forward (and out of the endless first chapter revision loop), I’m planning to write a quick draft of both chapters before going back to revise. I’m keeping the old chapter in my NaNo novel for word count, but nixing it in the real novel.

I hope you had a wonderful weekend! What did you do with your extra hour?

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